All Comments on 'ice cream foreplay'

by sophia jane

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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I have always thought the ice cream should be before the main course. Glad to find someone else who agrees and glad too see a poem from you, it's been awhile. Worth the the wait.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 18 years ago
I scream

for ice cream... great poem!

jgywnnjgywnnover 18 years ago
Threads

The threads that tie together events in our mind. Well done.

Thank you

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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With this type diet,

Sex could get fattening.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
That final line...

redeems it! A wonderful sentiment, SJ!

Fly

yuiyuiover 18 years ago
It made me melt

These lines, "the bite hard, too hard,

and just right," just made me melt. Nice job, SJ!

~photoguy~~photoguy~over 18 years ago
yumm

loved it ... now I have this inexplicable craving for some Ben & Jerry's .. hehe

cloudycloudyover 18 years ago
I like this!

it captures lust and playfulness wonderfully! Nice job.

logophilelogophileover 18 years ago
I've been remiss -

In not staying current with my poetry reading. I somehow managed to miss this wonderful gem from my best friend, Sophie. Thank you for sharing this with us. I especially like your parenthetical notations of location. They fit perfectly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
:)

Awesome poem, doll. I admit to my own cravings after reading it. ;)

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