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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
the best kindergarten poem

this month, surely beats

"roses are red, violets are blue, please swallow when I fill you with goo"

TheLustfulTigressTheLustfulTigressabout 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you, Anonymous!

Thank you for your feedback, Anonymous, even though it was a bit harsh. I accept any and all criticism in order to be better. Is there anything you suggest I do differently in the future to improve?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
You Outdid Didself

I just didn't think it was possible for your writing to decline even more...Honestly you tried, and that's all that matters but by any means your writing has gotten shittier.

Nouh_BdeeNouh_Bdee11 months ago

Fantastic work!

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Hello, all! I am delighted to finally get over my shyness and nerves and sign up to Literotica. I thought it was about time to go from silent fan to writer. I will be writing about all the fantasies I've had, all the naughty things I've thought about and done, and all the new,...