All Comments on 'If You Were Mine'

I can relate to this.

well done

Thank you

I like how this is very lyrical and dedicated to that dream of unrequited love. But I think it would be better as a song. :)

this rings true. I love the repeating lines at the end of each stanza. Wonderful.

This is exactly true of how I feel about someone, thank you for putting it into words for me!