All Comments on 'I'll be your wishing star'

by vixen_2006

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Very nice and sweet...

as she offers to not only be his confidant.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A nice little piece of promises, though a little tweaking could help. Have him tell everything, not just secrets; right now it has an air of guilty secrets shared.

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