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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Very nice

Moving on and starting fresh

Cleaned and ready;

And BTW, Welcome back to Lit

After a long absence.

TheRainManTheRainManover 18 years ago
There is something very nice here.

Enjoyable reading.

I agree with today's reviewer that this needs to be edited and tightened up to heighten its punch by making it less redundant.

Nice concept and poem.

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