All Comments on 'In a Jeep, With Dirty Hands'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

Five.

postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
The

part about snot on your cuffs reminds me of mending fences back home in the middle of winter, trying to hurry before the horses get out in the road, and having to sniffle every three seconds to keep from dripping all over. Nice job!

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Good to see you!

Great to have you back, D.A.; we've missed your crazy verse around here!

This piece is an interesting combo of prose and poetry- I think the poetry works better. That last stanza could stand on its own.

Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
lol

you just described my husband and half the people he knows, to a T, damn!!! good job, at least its a job, heh ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
a small picture on a bigger one

You always have a story tell, DA, and one that is a facinating little glimpse on your real life. Nice, real nice—great content. Enjoyed.

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