by My Erotic Tail
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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Something magical in the words, "I left you standing in a stormy way..." What poignancy, and tenderness filled with palpable regret.
Im not a fan of rhymes,and is more of a rhyme than real poetry, but this is catchy, keep working, you show great promise..just remember the difference between rhymes and poetry. Its like apples and oranges, two differnt things