All Comments on 'In Fire'

I love the final outcome, how I got to see you work this and I am amazed and awed.

I'm not surprised, I know your greatness.

Very well done babe...for lack of words.

Your Vampire.

you poem, from what I could read sounded great but the font is way to small. I could only make out about half of the text...very frustrating because I think the poem was excellent. Perhaps you should post it again later in larger font so it can be apperciated properly. ~S

... so I saved the image to disk & enlarged it. I like what you've done with it since the early versions on the Poetry Forum. Well done, sugar! ~Imp

the txt was a little small

and hard to read in places

but the poem was excellent

and i look forward to re reading

it.

Good effort.

~ J

Aside from the text being so small as to render it almost unreadable ~ this poem was interesting in that the first line of each stanza started with the words, "I dreamt of fire last night...Illustration had lovely color.

This image is horrid; to read I did the simple thing & put it to paint set to 200% and inverted the colors. Now I could read it. Very well done ~ pity you couldn't fix it yourself.; but then perhaps there were limitations here with what Lit could handle...