All Comments on 'In the Cage'

Oh, this is good. Full of raw emotions but not corny or sappy. Some people let out their anger or lust or grief in their poetry but it comes across as an annoying shriek or "shut the fuck up" sobs. This poem is good. Yes, a lot of emotion but you still have control over your words, which makes it good poetry.

it is real, it is raw and it is wonderful fucking poetry. i have felt that way about someone n my life.

I LOVE this. I will be reading you every chance I get.

kudos

NJ

Definately my favorite of your new poems. Real, nothing held back, you go.