All Comments on 'In the end'

DC:

This one makes me so thankful for what I had. Thank You for reminding me. Ronnie W.

This is my pick !!!

So much sadness.

Aww what to do eh ~

Heartbreaking

and told with such a passion of love.

Just wonderful.

Great imagery, flow,

and so bitter sweet.

More gurl .. Give us More ~!!

A more sober tone than what I've seen from you before...

"Eyes of darkened brown,

and ones of chocolate hue,

stare and see the other,

hurt and full of blue."

You've outdone yourself RF.

there is the could have beens,

should haves , and would have if's..

your perfect example of love gone wrong,

and the result of the before said ..

Strong Write.. *winks*

-sGp-

The pain of regret

resonates so well,

as one becomes two

wondering of the other,

"Who are you?"

Well done - again.