All Comments on 'In The Moonlight'

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miss_trustmiss_trustover 15 years ago
phrases & words

"all the way down," "black water," "frogs plop," I can see all of it... I can hear the insects, feel the breeze. Maybe because I've spent so much time in the country this strikes a cord & I recall ponds I've seen with a life of their own. Thank you.

WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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"Ripples that in the moonlight shimmer." Why not try: Ripples shimmer in the moonlight. "Whirring, like mosquitoes caught In a net" is a nice description.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Oh yeah

vivid, rhythmic, tangible, inspirational. Thank you for creating this, and giving it.

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