All Comments on 'In the Shower'

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Not much feeling here but the cute factor compensates.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Oh.. I hope...

thats a cold shower. But it's pretty hard in a bathtub/ I mean the tub. I think you lost a bit of momentum on this one poem, compared with your other sizzlers of the day.

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