All Comments on 'in the thin air'

Enjoyed this- good to read you again

succinct and clear, I think you could still cut a word or two.

my first american year i

spent in west engineering

(building) on east university

(street)

in ann arbor

walking up and down

the fire emergency stairs

attached to outside of the wall

– my office window was my door (do you need closing punctuation here? It reads like "my door" was "my green card"

was my green card

window = door = green card