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by RedHeadedVixen

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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So much for the passivity of gerunds, as you so well demonstrate in that first strophe.

My only suggestion is to change:

"His sex plunges passionately into me."

to

"He passionately plunges into me."

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