All Comments on 'In the Trees'

here, but some of the words could be trimmed. Tighten this up and it could work quite well. Write on!

Topics rooted in so many emotions and ties, family breathing and your themes of recognition are inspirational Du, I aint just blowing your dress up cause I know your naked <grin> great poem~ and metioned on "New Poems Reviews"

The idea and the images are very effective but the expression is not to your usual quality. First stanza in particular doesn't read well especially the last line.I agree with previous comment that a tightening up would help.

Like trees, we need nurturing to grow and branch out, and everything starts at the root of our being.