All Comments on 'Inclinations'

Thwarted too often, they're best this way.

would not impress a nest of nightingales. -like, not sure if will would not sound better, enclosing phrase with L's, would has a slightly longer duration, (d) emphasizing that position more.

S1 is enclosed, S2 and thereafter, rhyme is broken, intent?

it's unknown to all.- redundant, after so secret, and called attention too, by scheme break, why?