All Comments on 'incomplete'

this well written and ironic poem!

Cute little poem. Sweet imagery!

I liked this! Thanks for sharing.

Curiouswife

Short...sweet...wanting more...

cute poem, nice images, and the realization that even when you get what you think you wont, you are still incomplete, because material objects cannot complete a person. enjoyed the poem, please write more.

no words wasted, speaks volumes. This is what poetry is all about! Bravo!

It seems there is a real message her for someone? I wonder who?

Max