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Love like a Popsicle
On the hot summer days
Sugar-sweet syrup dripping down my face
Craving a touch to soften the heat
I got what I want
I am still incomplete

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
message?

It seems there is a real message her for someone? I wonder who?

Max

sacksackover 18 years ago
very cogent...

no words wasted, speaks volumes. This is what poetry is all about! Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
cute.

cute poem, nice images, and the realization that even when you get what you think you wont, you are still incomplete, because material objects cannot complete a person. enjoyed the poem, please write more.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Short...sweet...wanting more...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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I liked this! Thanks for sharing.

Curiouswife

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Cute

Cute little poem. Sweet imagery!

sacksackover 18 years ago
I got what I want....

this well written and ironic poem!

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