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Click hereLove like a Popsicle
On the hot summer days
Sugar-sweet syrup dripping down my face
Craving a touch to soften the heat
I got what I want
I am still incomplete
It seems there is a real message her for someone? I wonder who?
Max
no words wasted, speaks volumes. This is what poetry is all about! Bravo!
cute poem, nice images, and the realization that even when you get what you think you wont, you are still incomplete, because material objects cannot complete a person. enjoyed the poem, please write more.