by petalsonfire
I just wanted to let ya know this one is a hottie. I loved it. The images comes to mind Wow! The flow of the poem is great..Keep up the great work~~!!!
though I did feel the cadence fell out in a few places and broke my pace a bit....overall sizzling.
I absolutely loved this one. Petalsonfire always manages to hit a top note whenever she writes. She must have a sex-life which is quite enviable. I certainly envy her!