All Comments on 'Infinite Sensuality'

Welcome to Lit

With this your first piece

A bit of a long read, erotic indeed;

Have some fun and stay awhile

Try some pieces, shorter, more intense.

This may be the most erotic poem I have read on this site. It seems to intend to smack you right between the eyes with its sensually charged words. Sexual images abound, senses of looking and feeling get appropriately exploited to good effect. A great first effort. Welcome aboard! ~ SensuousLady

Thank you for allowing me to read this *kisses*

So carnal. So urgent.