Insights from the Bottle

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What do you wait for?
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In a bottle upon the sea,
Drifting with the waves,
And blown on by a breeze.
Inside carrying a message,
For everyone to read.


Where has it been seen,
Among the vast extreme.
Or perhaps a mere gleam,
Looking inside of a beam.


Infectious rhythmic seas,
Among whispered breeze.
This message gently floats,
Waits for one to read its note.


Given to a reader with hope,
It floats alone with total ease.
Without any known expertise,
In harmony of wind and sea.


The bottle with its note drifts,
Waits for the note to be freed.

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Satyr61Satyr615 months ago

Though it rhymes triumphantly I LOVE IT. Very poetic.

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