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by RhymeFairy

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Love It! And those speed bumps'll do it to ya every time!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
speed bumps...

wow RF, your poem is GREAT. I see such a bright ray of sun shine shining from an excelled poet <grin> paramount poetry, flow, length, style, topic and showered with your sun shine.

a gem of a poem

sacksackover 18 years ago
good sense of rhythm....

unaffected by the speed bumps! A compact little poem, expertly realized.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Very fun, loved the last two lines. A person can never say enough good things about speed bumps.

ty,bd

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
INTOXICATION...

would be correct...

VERY Hottttttttttt!

YOU HAVE the gift girl !!

sGp

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