All Comments on 'Introduction'

Please allow me more than just three minutes. With sex like that I would want to be with you always. (Or four minutes at least)

Oh, I think everyone is going to love the ending here *smiles*

Some suggestions (no harm meant)

All ready,on my hands and knee`s- Already on my hands and knees

sex exposed for you to see

a vertical smile that drips hello

introduce yourself let her know -and let her know

how inviting she`s become to you- she has become to you.

Great poem!