All Comments on 'It's Around the Corner'

It deserves a little more care in editing. "its" should be "it's" in the body of the poem, toward the end you wrote I' where I believe you meant I'm, existance=existence, etc. Some of the sentences do not make sense as written, even in the context of the poem. The male figure you mention toward the end first sounds like an adult, then changes into a child riding a tricycle. I hope you will resubmit this...it deserves a face lift!