All Comments on 'It's just a trivial thing'

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EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
Good vilanelle

TYour repetitions and rhymes work well - not forced

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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another form, I not partial to. This is very well handled.

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