by LexiRoseLexi
This is the first poem I've read here and a great one to start with!!!!
people in th epoem? I either counted 3, 4, 5 or 6. Very difficult read for one not into fem on fem. I think you worked hard on this, but I also think you rushed to submit ( the poem) and it could have been better.
BUT A VERY DANGEROUS ANIMAL OUT OF CONTROL. tk u mlj lv nv
Dave, I'm glad you liked it and thanks :)
Anonymous, I was aiming for 4, MMFF, but now you mention it I've noticed it is a lil ambiguous and I quite like it :) gives the reader more scope to imagine a scenario that fits them.