All Comments on 'Jealousy - such a wasted emotion'

by LexiRoseLexi

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dave110256dave110256almost 12 years ago
VERY HOT

This is the first poem I've read here and a great one to start with!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
how many

people in th epoem? I either counted 3, 4, 5 or 6. Very difficult read for one not into fem on fem. I think you worked hard on this, but I also think you rushed to submit ( the poem) and it could have been better.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
NOT ONLY A WASTE

BUT A VERY DANGEROUS ANIMAL OUT OF CONTROL. tk u mlj lv nv

LexiRoseLexiLexiRoseLexialmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks all

Dave, I'm glad you liked it and thanks :)

Anonymous, I was aiming for 4, MMFF, but now you mention it I've noticed it is a lil ambiguous and I quite like it :) gives the reader more scope to imagine a scenario that fits them.

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