by Honey123
Very hot poem, though I think I would need more than just a taste.
TY, BD
Tastey poetry~ deliciously served and inticed my apetite. He he he good poem (~_*) Thanks
Great work babe. I'll never look at a Milky Way the same again.
Great, soft, sensual, vivid....
I want to taste you, to share the moment.....
Oh, to be
That candy bar
To feel your lips
againt me
You teeth
devour me...
Damn, Babe, Now you got me started. Good job Honey.
like all your stories and thoughts, absolutely the best and what's unsaid is so erotic. Can't wait for more.
Great poem. Making a mental note to pick up a Milky Way on the way home from work, give it to the mrs along with a link to this.
...that sex and chocolate connection? Nice first (but better not be last) contribution. Not enough babe, gimme more. Maybe a popsicle poem next? ~~evil grin~~
Mmm...I always thought there was a reason I loved Milky Way over other types of candy bars. I really liked this, esp for a first time submission (I might have punctuated differently, but that's the kind of personal thing you have to decide for yourself.) Very evocative. <g>
Sticky and sweet? Yes, a wonderful combination indeed. Nice poem, Honey.
~lucky
Deeelishus. Looks even better on the screen. Well done Honey. xxxxx
I don't think I will ever look at caramel the same way, now if I could only get a taste of Honey.
*hopping in car.. driving to store..purchasing milkyway and its all your fault*
v~