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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Good stuff

good stuff, Curt

mentioned in today's new poem reviews

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 17 years ago
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write my name

in rust colored

bodymade paint

across your

insensativities

Try this: take out "bodymade", paint on line by itself, so it can be read as "paint across your..." etc. Just a thought. I like the quirky rhyme buried in this.

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 17 years ago
^

I agree with 1201, but either way (bodypaint or not) I like.

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Blah blah just the same ol stuff