All Comments on 'Just Ask'

The uncertainty, the whim, the daring ... all wrapped up. Well done. ~Imp

I smiled through your poem, thinking ~ wondering: Should she? Will she? And then of course, wondering: Could I? Nice job!

~Honey

Mixing up the Suess-like repeating rhymes with more mature vocabulary and themes. I really enjoyed it and smiled my way through.

my breath throughout this poem. The temptation, the desire, the questioning hesitation building inexorably until the delicious need is finally voiced. Lovely! Thanks, sweets! LJ