All Comments on 'Kalukalukalu'

I loved the mood, imagery, appearance, flow; everything about this! Damn, what fine writing! (typo line 14 i think)

This is really excellent, steve.

As is all you create! I would have used a few line breaks to make this easier to read and to highlight some sections. Otherwise, an "11 on a scale of 10!"

damn, Steve, excellent, I love your poems like this, you had me freezing then gave me spring and hope, excellent!!

This is, in my myopic opinion, one of the finest poems I have read here in a long time. Ponder it, polish it, and publish it.