All Comments on 'King of Vague'

I liked the way the cricket on the tricycle turned the blackbird into ice cream

I am a little vague about the part why you would bother to go the door if you are locked in, besides if you where in the white house, wouldn't like a serpent do it

because I understand the poem.

first off...

I think you meant Queen of vague,

then you have to be vague ...

now waiting on the men in white ... lol

over all it was interesting~

I really like that.

You tied it all together nicely.. especially the way you tied in all loose ends.. the cricket, the blackbird...

Great job!! ;-)

the sarcasm in this throughout. some are subtle and others not as subtle. i dig how you finished up the piece. I do see the vagueness of it too. i also like the blackbird and the cricket thing going on. the cricket as the noise maker and the blackbird as like the overseer. it makes me think. nicely done sack.......don

Your images are beautiful. Your word magic - poignant and delicate - seemed pulled from empty air to satisfy the soul. A lovely rendering!