All Comments on 'Kissing You'

This cannot be just about fruit,<br>

not when it reverberates with a<br>

yes<br>

YES<br>

<b>YES!</b><br>

<br>The lush plump ripeness of your sensual world is executed with such seeming lack of effort. There is an intoxicating arousal to a state of joie de vivre that results from experiencing this perfectly executed poem — not to mention the mixed juices that run down my chin. <br>

something about cumquats. and the other juicy fruits. having tried a few sonnets, I found this one an inspiration. effective images and activity evoked.

Excellent meter! And very sensual.

Thanks! Such a beautiful poem. Evokes emotion with wonderful imagery.