All Comments on 'Kraken'

Wow! I love the ocean theme. Beautiful sex.

Liked the title — perfect for the mix of metaphorical images you create. Any number of lines so captivating “…like twisted sea dreads…”. Last two stanzas put smile on one’s face. Not sure why FUCK is capitalized — curious; certainly does not detract. Like your poetry.

such great turns of phrase. "Daddy's never seen/his little girl/ride a seahorse so hard." W.H. Auden could never!

Ah ... the visual images !

... you have done it again.

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take care, stay safe levi

Very nice.

You have raised my pulse with this one, DampKitten.

Mythical proportions of lust and carnal consummation!

Love it!

DK loves her Daddy's cock,

A one eyed monster play stick

It makes her cum in copious waves

It's long, it's hard, it's thick.

He slides it into her dripping cave

She loves how it feels so tight

Daddy's cock gives her orgasms wave after wave

And she squirts with all her might.

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

A Kraken is a mythical creature; cud be a Giant Squid which may grow to 50 meters!!! The first verse , inter alia, states the Kraken has been released....Mythologically young maidens were sacrificed at the altar of Lust of this Sea Monster....thank you for the daring imagery....