All Comments on 'Laying Beside You.'

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aparody75aparody75over 6 years ago
I hate toys

Just my own personal feelings about them, but I read putting that aside I liked the loving tone of this piece, just being honest it got to a point where I was forcing myself to read on. How it started, pleasant to read, just when you kept going, it dragged on.

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Story-teller, of erotica, that inspires my art. My gift to you, for your pleasure and amusement.