All Comments on 'Le Petit Mort'

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE L.P.M. SURROUNDS

the aurae of one or two in ectasy. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
just another

Boring poem about orgasm. I do not understand these petit selections of words clumped together and tha the "author" think they are poetic. Look up the last 500 poems with this title, they are all alike and boring, plain and simple. you can do much better

demure101demure101almost 12 years ago
superb

alliterative sensuality!

DawnJDawnJover 11 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous

Funny you should say that, as this wasn't a poem about an orgasm! Perhaps if you looked for more than orgasms in your reading, you'd understand that there is more happening here. Perhaps it's your reading that's boring! Never assume you have all the answers.

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