All Comments on 'Leah's Ring'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Like I was saying, so strong does the triolet run in your blood, its variant bursts through here;

Makes me wonder, how deliberate was it? If nothing else, you've got me watching all your words for patterns, even when no obvious triolet is present (I know - you do write poems totally without even a hint of the triolet pattern - seen it on the threads).

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Lovely.

The triolet's reiteration of lines is most appealing.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
Unsurprisingly

I found the content and the tone of this poem very disturbing.

Unsurprisingly, it was just an echo to the foul contempt you find in the lowest play by the best of the dramatists.

Unsurprisingly it did not disturb anyone else to say so.

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