Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Learning to Let Go'

by scorprose7

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 3 Comments
YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Letting go

If you really mean it,

Why not change "my" in the last line to "just"?

scorprose7scorprose7about 20 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Good suggestion. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. It's really not based on my life experience in relationships but of someone I knew. Thank you for the advice. :-)

spikesbintspikesbintabout 20 years ago
i like it just the way it is

of course the author already knows this. hi! couldn't resist leaving a message! go on with your bad self!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login