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All Comments on 'Leave Me Salivating'

by christcat69

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J.DoeJ.Doeover 18 years ago
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Your punctuation on this poem is superflous.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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ahhh ~

well done - and not just salivating

but can sense the breathing

turning ragged....

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I would give it a little work

I get the desire, but the creativity is missing. Keep on writing!

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