All Comments on 'Leaving her bored'

writing and like demure, I like that you've obscured the form with a pretty dazzling run of words. I'm not sure I like the use of "festering" especially with "crust" as I don't think a crust can fester, can it? Also there's a bit of an ew factor there which doesn't really add anything to the poem otherwise. Overall though the poem made me smile: it's the kind of situation that could only happen in our modern digital world and you stated it politely (mostly), but clearly and cleverly.

dresssed up not to look like one... funny and a little sad.