All Comments on 'Left Wiper: Broken'

and especially since it is your first post.

I like the idea and can visualize it. I woudl only suggest a bit of rearranging of the lines, would make it a bit stronger.

otherwise, I enjoyed :)

keep up th e good work!

maria

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