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by NahNahman

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bluerainsbluerainsabout 20 years ago
better now!!

much more evoking....nice work...smiles/bluerain

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Hope you find your mermaid.

Do you ever read your poems out loud?

Don't you feel the rhythm stumble when you do?

You have written far better than this.

Hope you find your mermaid.

Don't bother with the sirens.

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