by demure101
in the entire poem only "forever" jarred in the transition from v4 to v5. In something otherwise marvelous it seemed lazy.
Seasons come and seasons go, like the women talking of Michaelangelo. :)
"Time for you and time for me,
And time yet for a hundred indecisions,
And for a hundred visions and revisions,
Before the taking of a toast and tea."
Smiles at you...