All Comments on 'Lesser Celandine'

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HarryHillHarryHillabout 11 years ago
The green rag of Spring

sets bood boiling, nice

ArjayEiffArjayEiffabout 11 years ago
one word

in the entire poem only "forever" jarred in the transition from v4 to v5. In something otherwise marvelous it seemed lazy.

DawnJDawnJabout 11 years ago
Inevitability

Seasons come and seasons go, like the women talking of Michaelangelo. :)

demure101demure101about 11 years agoAuthor
Dear Dawn,

Let us go then, you and I....

DawnJDawnJabout 11 years ago
There will be time...

"Time for you and time for me,

And time yet for a hundred indecisions,

And for a hundred visions and revisions,

Before the taking of a toast and tea."

Smiles at you...

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