All Comments on 'Let Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
you have got to be careful with the word "wind"

especially followed by rocking hips but perhaps it is appropriate here

Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
Praying at the Alter....

The perfect place to kneel allowing the sweetest of addictions nourishing two souls. Thanks for sharing...

leahcarrleahcarrabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for reading!

Thank you everyone who has read my poems! Please leave or send comments, it's so wonderful to get feedback and encouragement (though I'm not entirely certain that that "wind" comment is constructive, really.) I hope that you enjoy them as much as I do :)

I am working on several stories, and hope to have some beginnings up soon. New poems should be up semi regularly, as I have been inspired rather often recently.

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