All Comments on 'Let Me Remember'

The more poetic of the writer's initial offering,

but this work needs some more work.

It offers the reader nothing original

except a continual switching of speakers.

This quickly becomes annoying and confusing.

Take it back and simplify,

or at least differentiate the voices visually.

Are you gender confused?

Not only highly erotic, but, also beautifully crafted...All your work, whether erotic or non-erotic has a wonderful clarity and truthfullness...Thank you...

Once I found out that it was BOTH lovers then I loved it. It shows the feelings that both are experiencing.

Hagar the Horrible