All Comments on 'Like a lie'

this is a VERY interesting story, I wish you had completed it, but I will settle for this slice of life and wonder about "her" all day now...

:)

I liked this when I read it on the poetry forum. I wish it were a bit less enigmatic, if for no other reason than it's a fascinating story. On the other hand, maybe it's fine to let the reader's imagination do the work... :)