by Remec
You did a excellent job with this one. Mentioned on the new poems review thread.
<br>Disarmingly simple,<br>
does its job <br>
and gets out of the way.<br>
Lingerie and poetry simply belong together.
I adore that closing line. It's worth the price of admission, on it's own. :)
an excellent write about a lingering topic, the poem was short and sweet such as the material it was written about...two thumbs up (grin)
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nice to read you again!
that this piece was also reviewed in the Underwear Poetry Contest thread. People liked it. I agreed with them. And while normally I squinch a bit at poems that feel like they have "punchlines", I actually liked the ending of this. Nicely done.