All Comments on 'Lingerie'

by Remec

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WickedEveWickedEveover 15 years ago
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You did a excellent job with this one. Mentioned on the new poems review thread.

lorencinolorencinoover 15 years ago
Hurray

<br>Disarmingly simple,<br>

does its job <br>

and gets out of the way.<br>

UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 15 years ago
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Mmmmmmm sexy boy with sexy poems

sassynycsassynycover 15 years ago
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Lingerie and poetry simply belong together.

I adore that closing line. It's worth the price of admission, on it's own. :)

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 15 years ago
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an excellent write about a lingering topic, the poem was short and sweet such as the material it was written about...two thumbs up (grin)

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nice to read you again!

unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
allow me to mention

that this piece was also reviewed in the Underwear Poetry Contest thread. People liked it. I agreed with them. And while normally I squinch a bit at poems that feel like they have "punchlines", I actually liked the ending of this. Nicely done.

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