by Randi Grail
Your poem has an amazing feeling of peace and tranquility captured within the last few lines. An eloquently beautiful submission. Welcome to Literotica!
It makes you seem much older than your own age. (According to your author info at least.) An experienced soul in a young package? :)
...is a new poet who looks like she will be a joyous addition to this community. Just a wonderful offering, of far, far better quality than is usually seen here from a newcomer. Keep this coming!