All Comments on 'Little Leaf'

Quite good!

have been better with some pruning, LOLOLOLOL. I have a rake you can borrow to get rid of that old brown. You tried too hard to be good. Let it come naturally. This is forced, hence, boring

then she will become the 1st. TK U MLJ LV NV

As for tazz317 and kstarnes....its funny how 2 BOYS who have not written anything at all can be so critical of the ppl who do write....maybe they are just jealous b/c they have no talent and feel the need like all jealous school kids and try to belittle the ones who do have a talent for writting....really kids get a life

Actually tazz didn't criticize he just observed !

I don't know why I call any of this poetry, anything I write is really just random thoughts and feelings that I jot down. Thank you for the comments!