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by MotherWolf

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 8 years ago

This has wonderful sounds with its irregularly placed rhymes and near rhymes, MW, and the allusion to the fairy tale is amusing and imaginative, even without your Literotica monicker.

Standing "amongst" the flaxen strands doesn't say it well IMO. Furthermore, being "roguish,' it seems she could be doing more than merely standing. How about understanding her flaxen..twirling and curling....

"old" and "loud," although subtle, has a nice ring to it, and I loved the last line, preceded by her musk; a very seductive end to the poem.

I'm not sure if you visit "Poetry Feedback & Discussion," but I'm recommending others come read this wonderful erotic poem.

MotherWolfMotherWolfalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks

It's nice to meet people who like bad poetry.

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