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As I said in the other PC.

Have you been reading my diary again?

Love the last line the best... 'again?'

Kewl, I'm gonna read the rest of your poems. I love poetry.

Are obvious and well stated. Good job. With the repetition, I sense that your feelings don't match your words, or your words don't tell the whole story. But that is good, lying by omission and implication makes the reader work to grasp the true meaning.

...come through quite clearly. Good job! ~Minx

Pasha, your words painted your feeling. Nicely done!~Moonie

...conflict here Rika. Which is actually a strength because that is how these kind of situations can be. Often you yourself don't know what you are thinking or where you want to go next.

and based on real life? Hope you are feeling better recently!